hitman
05-21-2007, 10:01 PM
hi guys this is my input on the transformers. i know a lot of people are doing this one but till i have the skills i am going to stick with the covers of films i enjoy and i grew up with this one....... this is the secound one i have done/started now so as before feed back a must please guys.......many thanks hitman.......sorry about not posting for a short time been away with work and not had a lot of time......
gravital
05-22-2007, 02:19 AM
Good lookin cover hitman. There are a few things that need 2 b fixed.
Spine: Autobot logo is carrrying over to the front.
Spine Rating logo: I think that it would look better without or replaced by the Paramount logo
Spine and Front: The transformer logo has some fringe that could be removed and at some point during the process the f and the o have lost their upper bevels
angrylion
05-22-2007, 04:56 AM
Looks v.cool dude - just the image on the top of spine clips the blue strip.
SilentWarrior
05-22-2007, 06:28 AM
I agree with what gravital has said. This is your 2nd one Hitman? Great work mate:thumbup:
hitman
05-22-2007, 08:54 AM
thanks guys....i know about the little bits wanted to get a base then work it from there so i will sort out the little bits still got a lot in mind for this and will see how it goes.......yeah second one silent the first was the spiderman 3 i done thanks to the feedback off everyone i think it turned out ok....like i said thanks for the feedback guys.....
hitman
05-27-2007, 01:16 AM
quick update guys......i went off the qriginal design i started with and ended up with a total new look.....as before all coments welcome good and bad...many thanks hitman
gravital
05-27-2007, 07:23 PM
I like this better than the 1st so, Good Job.
2things for ya to consider.
1. The transformer on the reverse. I can see that you have an outer glow to it. I think that if you increase the distance that it falls of the image it will turn out better. Right now it is so thin that it looks like a bad job at cutting the image out.
2. The Synopsis... It is not really all that long but the font that you have chosen is taking up a lot of space and detracting from the other images on the back. I would suggest to keep the font but decrease the size.
Again hitman, looks good, keep it up:thumbup:
hitman
06-05-2007, 10:54 AM
update guys......
think i have finished with this now have added another 2 to it as well so let me know guys if there is anything that can be improved and i will have a look before i upload them many thanks guys.......
SilentWarrior
06-05-2007, 11:16 AM
They look very nice. Just one thing though.., the dvd logo on the spines look squashed.
kylumi
06-05-2007, 09:26 PM
you have endured and done really well with these buddy:thumbup:
stryker427
06-05-2007, 09:50 PM
Nice covers Hitman:thumbup:
hitman
06-05-2007, 11:41 PM
thanks for the good comments guys will get the uploaded shortly just got ot sort out the dvd logo thanks sw.......
hitman
06-13-2007, 11:57 PM
finished and uploaded guys :)