View Full Version : Max Payne


Bisky
09-02-2008, 12:00 AM
Started this, while I`m thinkin of what the hell to do with Rocknrolla,lol

dragonbane
09-02-2008, 12:07 AM
i like that front image bisky but i'm not sure about the one on the back also try blending the screen caps a bit better, nice start m8 :thumbup:

batboysmatboy
09-02-2008, 01:05 AM
The front is really sharp. I like it.

Bisky
09-02-2008, 04:45 PM
Update, am strugglin with this, not gettin a good vibe about it, so any ideas would be great.

For a film that is 2008, the artwork is really limited.

DJPaZ
09-02-2008, 05:55 PM
bisky mate,the front looks really nice..:):):)
there are two high resolution posters in the gallery for this movie mate...
and also, if you could squeeze something like this to somewhere in the back, i think it would be cool too...
7150

its true what you said, its really hard to find hi-res art work for this...

JollyRoger
09-02-2008, 06:24 PM
Nice one :) - Think you should go with a sans serif font for synopsis tho

Bisky
09-03-2008, 12:47 AM
Update, still got a few things too add and tweak, but I think it looks better than before, what dya think?

dragonbane
09-03-2008, 12:53 AM
yeah deffo looks better bisky :thumbup:

Bisky
09-03-2008, 03:53 AM
Latest update. Far too tired to do anymore,lol

only thing am not too sure about is the badge or is it a toilet seat,hmm.

I liked the idea but am not sure it goes, any ideas or should I scrap it?

cheers

DJPaZ
09-03-2008, 04:51 AM
there now, it looks great mate!!! :):):)

batboysmatboy
09-03-2008, 05:41 AM
Bisky, there are so many good things about this cover. It is really shaping up. I love the front pic, and the crime scene tape was a stroke of genius.

About the badge, I think the badge works but the toilet seat doesn't. I saw Max flash his in a promo. I think it was a gold shield.

I attached two pics that look like his badge (with and without leather fob).

If you shape the toilet seat to look like the Badge (pic 7174), make the outside scallop in gold with the NYPD on the bottom, inside circle in that NYPD badge blue and the font in gold, I think it would look smoking.

Just a thought

Congrats on how good it looks so far.

sleepyhead
09-03-2008, 09:07 AM
Update looks so much better Bisky now there's not as much black.
I would reco playing with the synopsis as I don't think the way you've got it now works.
Try it typed normally (horizontal) lower the size a bit and have the tag go along the tape and under the text and see how that looks.
I like the idea of the badge but it's just not working at the moment m8. How about using a similar badge to batboy's and doing some kind of wallet that flips open - badge on one side SFs on the other? - just a thought - that might look crap but I think it's worth a look see.

JollyRoger
09-03-2008, 09:52 AM
:whs:

Bisky
09-03-2008, 05:59 PM
Is there a way to set the sypnosis to horizontal without turning it manually, so that its perfectly horizontal?

cheers

mizotlangval
09-03-2008, 09:27 PM
I like it a lot, keep it up. BTW, cheers for doing yet to release movies. i hope we can see more new releases covers often.

Bisky
09-03-2008, 09:52 PM
I like it a lot, keep it up. BTW, cheers for doing yet to release movies. i hope we can see more new releases covers often.

Cheers mate.

right guys, what a chore! first of all I had to find a decent wallet(bigger task then I thought and then I had to make the badge look like it was on the wallet, now am tryin to make it look right on the cover, so which one is best or do they both look rubbish?

any comments on how to make it better would be great.

cheers

dragonbane
09-03-2008, 10:06 PM
first one looks better mate feather the edge of the wallet a bit more to blend it better,
this is really coming along now m8 great job :cool:

sleepyhead
09-03-2008, 11:14 PM
Agree with db that first one is better, looks like it needs to be cutout a bit better, also the text needs realigning - looks a bit wonky at the moment. Needs a bit of perspective.
I think you should try a card type for that - like maybe an I.D. one white back, black text.

The synopsis needs tweaking m8 try justifying it and getting rid of any hyphenated words. The tag IMHO would look better bigger and maybe in just two lines going right across.

Having said all that I do like this Bisky just needs refining a little.

batboysmatboy
09-04-2008, 01:03 AM
Bisky...

"You the man"


One small thing, maybe distress the wallet a little and try a dull gold color on the font on the wallet.

Excellent work. Thanks for going that extra mile on the badge. It was worth it.

PS: send me the toilet seat, I need a new one

Bisky
09-04-2008, 01:40 AM
Bisky...

"You the man"


One small thing, maybe distress the wallet a little and try a dull gold color on the font on the wallet.

Excellent work. Thanks for going that extra mile on the badge. It was worth it.

PS: send me the toilet seat, I need a new one

pmsl, you watch, all the police force will be carryin toilet seats soon, there a badge and weapon in one.

Update, how we lookin?

batboysmatboy
09-04-2008, 02:13 AM
I said "You The Man" before, take that up another notch.

Gets better and better each time

sleepyhead
09-04-2008, 02:58 AM
Yeah m8 that looks great - I knew you'd get there in the end.

Bisky
09-04-2008, 03:42 AM
Cheers guys,

will leave it til tomorrow and if no more comments, will upload it, also gonna make a matchin label for this one.

heres imandix view.

cheers

dragonbane
09-04-2008, 03:51 AM
one thing i would change bisky is the number you've got on the spine i would have below the spine pic my own opinion of course. top job mate :thumbup:

Bisky
09-04-2008, 03:55 AM
one thing i would change bisky is the number you've got on the spine i would have below the spine pic my own opinion of course. top job mate :thumbup:

Done mate, cheers

Better or how it was?

dragonbane
09-04-2008, 04:22 AM
outstanding dude

batboysmatboy
09-04-2008, 04:53 AM
Another quality cover by Bisky.

Really, really like it.