boneapart
05-10-2008, 02:13 PM
Just finished working on this... Any comments appreciated...
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9373/hollywoodlandnewpreviewsc6.jpg
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9373/hollywoodlandnewpreviewsc6.jpg
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View Full Version : Hollywoodland boneapart 05-10-2008, 02:13 PM Just finished working on this... Any comments appreciated... http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9373/hollywoodlandnewpreviewsc6.jpg SilentWarrior 05-10-2008, 02:29 PM I like the layout here boney. I have 2 reco's for you: - Make the synopsis smaller. I think the font is too big at this stage. Perhaps finding a longer synopsis will fix that. - I love that textured look on the front. It would look great if the texture could extend into the back. hurkale 05-10-2008, 02:39 PM totally agree with SW. nice job! boneapart 05-10-2008, 03:17 PM Thanks SW and hurkale for your comments... RookerProductions 05-10-2008, 05:05 PM agree... But other than that, Looks great, one of my favs from you... boneapart 05-10-2008, 05:33 PM agree... But other than that, Looks great, one of my favs from you... Thanks RP... sleepyhead 05-10-2008, 06:23 PM Yep agree about the font size and also about having something in the background, maybe a few newspapers like the front. I'd reco changing the colour of the SF font or the white background. Nice work so far tho m8. boneapart 05-11-2008, 12:26 AM Yep agree about the font size and also about having something in the background, maybe a few newspapers like the front. I'd reco changing the colour of the SF font or the white background. Nice work so far tho m8. Thanks for the input sleepy. I'll have a mess around with the Special Features... |