View Full Version : An American Haunting (Final Update)


boneapart
05-06-2008, 01:51 PM
Not much artwork about for this, but decided to start a cover anyway... Comments appreciated...

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/5079/anamericanhauntingflatprc5.jpg

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3605/anamericanhauntingnewprnn8.jpg

UPDATED... SEE BELOW

tightline_69
05-06-2008, 01:56 PM
Damn, now I like this Boney. Great start.:thumbup:

boneapart
05-06-2008, 01:59 PM
Damn, now I like this Boney. Great start.:thumbup:

Thanks tightline...

SilentWarrior
05-06-2008, 02:59 PM
A very promising start here boney. The green you have chosen works really well here.

boneapart
05-06-2008, 03:35 PM
A very promising start here boney. The green you have chosen works really well here.

Thanks for the comments SW... But I think I'll change the colour of the title to white to see if it looks better. Watch this space.

boneapart
05-06-2008, 03:39 PM
Okay! I think maybe the White title is better...

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/2606/anamericanhauntingunfinin0.jpg

UPDATED... SEE BELOW...

RookerProductions
05-06-2008, 04:41 PM
I like the white better, all though the red is the color of blood.. But I really like what you have going here... Looking forward for an update

boneapart
05-06-2008, 05:35 PM
Decided to change the title font... I think this may look better. What do you think?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9702/anamericanhauntingunfindj8.jpg

sleepyhead
05-09-2008, 04:39 PM
Like this font better boney, looks good so far m8.

RookerProductions
05-09-2008, 06:47 PM
Yeah, I love the new font...

boneapart
05-09-2008, 11:45 PM
Like this font better boney, looks good so far m8.

Thanks Sleepy...

boneapart
05-09-2008, 11:45 PM
Yeah, I love the new font...
Thanks RP...

boneapart
05-09-2008, 11:53 PM
Okay! I think this is just about finished... What do you think?

http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/2317/anamericanhauntingminefge4.jpg

SEE UPDATE BELOW...

CORSAGAV
05-10-2008, 12:47 AM
the names on the front dont look right to me......you could try them like this ( not quite like this coz it wont let me space them right but you know what i mean)

Donald Sissy James Rachel
Sutherland Spacek D'Arcy Hurd-Wood

and for me, the bottom half of the back needs a little something, not sure what....maybe texture.

one last thing......the colour tint on the middle screen shot makes the woman look like Mrs Hulk, her face looks out of place.

RookerProductions
05-10-2008, 01:04 AM
I like it, but I agree with corsagav, I think the back is a bit empty...

hurkale
05-10-2008, 10:44 AM
yeah, you know what you're doin! great cover so far. the changes made it even better! :-)

boneapart
05-10-2008, 02:18 PM
the names on the front dont look right to me......you could try them like this ( not quite like this coz it wont let me space them right but you know what i mean)

Donald Sissy James Rachel
Sutherland Spacek D'Arcy Hurd-Wood

and for me, the bottom half of the back needs a little something, not sure what....maybe texture.

one last thing......the colour tint on the middle screen shot makes the woman look like Mrs Hulk, her face looks out of place.

Thanks for the input. I'll see what I can do...

boneapart
05-10-2008, 02:19 PM
I like it, but I agree with corsagav, I think the back is a bit empty...

Thanks for your comments RP...

boneapart
05-10-2008, 02:19 PM
yeah, you know what you're doin! great cover so far. the changes made it even better! :-)

Thanks hurkale...

SilentWarrior
05-10-2008, 02:25 PM
From the outset I'd say the back is missing something. I'm not too sure what at this stage though...

I can see what Corsa saying about the front. Perhaps move the names down below the TT. In any case I'm sure you'll do what right boney.

boneapart
05-10-2008, 02:47 PM
Okay I added a gradient and changed the bottom logos to White. How does it look now?

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8938/anamericanhauntingnewpryq5.jpg

RookerProductions
05-10-2008, 05:08 PM
I see you made the special features box bigger, I'd say it looks better.. I don't know if it's at all possible, but I had an idea. Maybe like on the back you can put a graveyard full of mist on the bottom.... Would match the front... But thats just an idea. Prop wouldn't work anyway

boneapart
05-10-2008, 05:31 PM
I see you made the special features box bigger, I'd say it looks better.. I don't know if it's at all possible, but I had an idea. Maybe like on the back you can put a graveyard full of mist on the bottom.... Would match the front... But thats just an idea. Prop wouldn't work anyway

Yes! I did make the SF Box larger and I'll give your idea about a bottom pic a try... Thanks for the input...