View Full Version : Superhero Movie


pauk
04-15-2008, 12:55 AM
Started this earlier, wondered what you thought.... any comments, pointers etc

shaunofthedead9
04-15-2008, 05:31 AM
Looks like a good start!

SilentWarrior
04-15-2008, 05:42 AM
Looks good pauk. From here the font used on the synopsis looks jaggy. Also I'd recommend aligning the right side of the synopsis to make it square overall. Will make it look much cleaner IMO.

RookerProductions
04-15-2008, 06:19 AM
hmm. not trying to be mean, but I would say try putting a lil but more creativity into the back cover..... Looks bland... Sorry, just saying whats on my mind...

thorn
04-15-2008, 01:17 PM
Hey, pauk! Just uploaded my version of superhero movie to the gallery. Might help you to take a look at that. In general R1 backs should have at least a row of screens plus some kind of other artwork on the top of the back, next or over or behind the synopsis.

Slipmeister
04-15-2008, 02:18 PM
I agree that this is a good start, but the back is a little bland...but I struggle with making the backs also, especially trying to get the proper mix of images and text.

Play arond with the back layout and maybe try a colourised background image?

pauk
04-15-2008, 08:55 PM
A little update, added a picture under the synopsis and changed the font,looks a little better, but still not sure.any suggestions?

sleepyhead
04-16-2008, 04:48 AM
If you're going to use a pic at the top of the back try not to completely cover it with text.
I would reco that you shorten the synopsis pick a thinner font and justify it then have it either left/right or maybe along the bottom above the screens. Looks kinda messy when you just center the text like that, I'd also maybe try to incorporate some silver to the back similar to the TT.

Hope this helps :)

mire20
04-23-2008, 06:12 PM
I agree that this is a good start, but the back is a little bland...but I struggle with making the backs also, especially trying to get the proper mix of images and text.

dragonbane
04-25-2008, 04:05 PM
have you thought about trying to find a pic of hourglass for the back of it as he is the main villain?