Corsa
03-28-2008, 08:19 PM
yet another WIP from me :D
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View Full Version : 21 Corsa 03-28-2008, 08:19 PM yet another WIP from me :D boneapart 03-29-2008, 02:10 AM I like this one Corsagav... But it would look much better if on the front cover you could get his feet on... sleepyhead 03-29-2008, 03:14 AM Looks very promising CORSA. I agree with boney on the front, I would also prefer a smaller sized font for the synopsis. Those chips look a little bit lowres m8, try and get some that a bit better quality. RookerProductions 03-29-2008, 06:30 AM I love what you got going on here, but I too agree with them.... Just fix those very minor things if you wish.. then you got a suburb cover... mr_cyclone 03-29-2008, 06:49 AM looks really good, also i agree with them on some minor fixes and it will look even tighter SilentWarrior 03-29-2008, 11:03 AM The concept is spot on m8. Those chips are slightly on the blurry side. I managed to get some good Hi-res shots of chips from over at sxc.hu. Corsa 03-29-2008, 12:09 PM I like this one gabo... But it would look much better if on the front cover you could get his feet on... He doesn't have any feet mate :biglaugh: thats all there is to the poster. i've got some new chips so i'll take care of that and i'll take a look at the synopsis too :thumbup: thanks guys ulookingatme 03-29-2008, 01:58 PM Looking good mate, agree with the chips but sounds like SW has sorted you out with those :D Theres a small mark above the card on the front 'below the 'ED' Little thing you probably havent got round too yet, the runtime not filled and also the bottom of the spine :) JollyRoger 03-29-2008, 02:46 PM I really like where you're going with this, cor!!! Corsa 04-08-2008, 12:51 AM ** UPDATE ** thanks for the feedback guys :thumbup: hows this looking?? SilentWarrior 04-08-2008, 01:12 AM Update looks ace corsa ;) Just notices you have a DVD logo hiding behind one of the chips on the front. Corsa 04-08-2008, 06:37 PM Update looks ace corsa ;) Just notices you have a DVD logo hiding behind one of the chips on the front. good spot SW.....I did see it but i forgot about it :rolleyes: ulookingatme 04-08-2008, 07:07 PM Looks good mate, much better :thumbup: sleepyhead 04-08-2008, 08:10 PM Update looks great m8. Just a couple of thoughts-: Maybe a tag or a critique above the screenshots? I wouldn't mind seeing how the pic along the top looks with a bit more contrast/darker. How about putting the TT on a chip, maybe inlaid? Corsa 04-09-2008, 01:19 AM * Update * thanks for the ideas sleepyhead......not sure how to get the pic along the top darker because of the blend mode but i have gone for a different blend mode thorn 04-09-2008, 08:18 PM the special edition banner looks out of place IMO. I would leave it out and instead type in the actor names up there. Also the title chip could perhaps be a little bigger and perhaps in red color. Kinda hard to notice like that. sleepyhead 04-09-2008, 09:57 PM Thorn raises a couple of good points and I think a set of red chips instead of green would work nicely. Not sure about the stroke on the tag. Maxx 04-09-2008, 11:14 PM Yes m8 its looking a lot better Corsa 04-13-2008, 06:41 PM *UPDATE* thanks as always for the feedback guys RookerProductions 04-14-2008, 02:24 AM looks good.. nice nice NICE JollyRoger 04-14-2008, 02:42 AM Looks real good now, Corsa! sleepyhead 04-14-2008, 04:40 AM Update looks great m8. shaunofthedead9 04-14-2008, 04:59 AM Awesome update, glad to see a very original idea worked out. Thumbs up on this one Corsagav. thorn 04-14-2008, 09:57 AM I would give the font you used for the actor names another thought and choose an edgier one, more in the style of the TT (Helvetica compressed etc.), perhaps even allign first and last name similar to 2 and 1 in the Title. But that might only be my personal preference. It surely turned out an awesome cover. Good work, mate. Corsa 04-14-2008, 10:29 PM @Thorn......I tried a few different fonts including Helvetica but non looked right. The font i've gone with is the same as they use on a casino table i saw last week :D I've just printed this off and think it looks pretty dam cool so i think i'm done nowand ready to upload...........thanks for all the feedback from everyone :thumbup: thorn 04-15-2008, 01:24 PM As I said personal preference that one with the font ;) And you're perhaps right. On a second look your font has some - how should I say - 'majestic', 'classy' feel that might even fit pretty well with the casino table style. Corsa 04-16-2008, 05:56 PM all finished and uploaded.....thanks for the help guys cassdi 06-07-2008, 12:30 AM nice nice gratz men |