RookerProductions
03-26-2008, 11:50 PM
Hey all, Here is a rough draft of what My front cover of the "The Forbidden Kingdom" looks like so far.. There is still more work to be done on it... Comments is appreciated.. Thanks..
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View Full Version : WIP The Forbidden Kingdom RookerProductions 03-26-2008, 11:50 PM Hey all, Here is a rough draft of what My front cover of the "The Forbidden Kingdom" looks like so far.. There is still more work to be done on it... Comments is appreciated.. Thanks.. ulookingatme 03-27-2008, 12:04 AM Looking good mate, not heard of this film but looks good with Jackie Chan and Jet Li involved :D SilentWarrior 03-27-2008, 12:51 AM Nice start, I like the front. boneapart 03-27-2008, 01:23 AM I love this front... Well donee... RookerProductions 03-27-2008, 08:38 AM thanks thanks... Yeah I like the way it came out... its a combination of a whole lot of pictures.. :) hiv88 03-27-2008, 09:23 AM Looks great m8 :) calinutzuu 03-27-2008, 12:28 PM Ok but this is just a personal opinion. I Think you should try other font for the two disc edition. The rest looks good. :P thorn 03-27-2008, 12:55 PM Looks good so far. My two cents would be to rethink the colouring of the actor names. Gives kinda bad contrast with the background which means it will be a little hard to read. Also perhaps apply an outer glow or a feather to the characters in the front. The cut seems pretty hard to me. RookerProductions 03-27-2008, 08:54 PM ok ok.. Thanks calinutzu, I wasnt too sure with the font for that, I'll play around with it.... Thorn, Im quite fond of the coloring of the actors names, but I will def.. play around with it and see what I can come up with.. As for the cutting of the actors on front, I'll fix that prob right away.. thanks for the comments... Love this kind of feedback. Thanks again RookerProductions 03-27-2008, 11:57 PM Here is an updated version.. still not completed... I uploaded my hi-rez copy so you guys can really dig deep and find errors or just good suggestions... thanks... ulookingatme 03-28-2008, 12:47 AM Really liking this cover mate, cant wait for the finished version :thumbup: SilentWarrior 03-28-2008, 01:08 AM Nice update Rooker. thorn 03-28-2008, 09:36 AM Now I can see it much better. The problem I mentioned with the readability of the actor names comes not necessarily from the colouring. You use a gradient fill that goes from yellow/brown to black. That's fine. If it wasn't for the shadow. The black colouring combined with the black shadow gives IMO not enough contrast for the lower half of the text. Look at your Title Treatment. Here you use an outer glow in red instead of the shadow. That looks a lot better and makes it really easy to read. Why not use a similar style for the actor names? Really like the back by the way. Awesome work there. CORSAGAV 03-28-2008, 12:01 PM thor makes a very good point about the actors names, i think an outer glow might look better. for me, i would get rid of the spike on top of the building on the front....cuts through the Title Treatment and looks a little strange. the left hand of Jackie Chans hair looks a little "solid" in the top pic on the front (if you know what i mean) loving the back mate and overall looking very nice |