Been working on this... Comments appreciated...

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2378/jumpercoverpreviewho3.jpg

UPDATED... SEE BELOW...

Looks nice boney. I think the TT needs to feel more as if its in motion.

I agree with SW on that, but it seems like it is the beginning of a very sharp cover.

Great start boney :thumbup:

Nice start boney.

I think Samuel needs a bit of lighting adjust on the front m8.

Looking nice boney and agree with the TT comment, it needs some 'pizzazz' :)

Looks great, but i think the pic. with samuel L. Jackson on the cover is a little "Cheesy"

Thanks for all your comments. By the way SW, what do you mean the TT needs a bit of motion??? I've made a few alterations, what do you think.?

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3091/jumpervers2unfinishedpray3.jpg

ANOTHER UPDATE FURTHER BELOW!

Update looking good Boney, not sure if SW and myself were talking about the same thing as i can only answer for me but i think the TT with motion should look like its 'on the move' as it were similar to the text i added below.

It just takes away the 'staticness' of it as its a fast paced film and needs a TT to match.

The font i used was Barbatrick but you can wither manipulate your text to give it that feel or use the font if you wish.

These are just suggestions of course :D

Thanks for your comments ULAM and thanks for the expination of on the move.(Stupid me, I should have realized that) (LOL)

You know you have the filter. Dublicate TT then use Motion blur on the one underneath in your layers palette. That should get you moving! ;)

The blue color should be replaced with some warm orange. Your first attempt was better. I would also switch the logos on the spine. 20th should go on top. And since the main character isn't that girl - you should consider using one of the boy.

There's some amazing art work for this flick in cyber space - unfortunately the film is crap. :(

Yep Boney, I was speaking of the same thing as ULAM. Some motion blur or other effect to make it look as though it were moving :)

Looking nice but the font is a bit naf to me

Thanks for your comments JR... I'll try that.

Thanks for your comments SW, much appreciated...

Thanks for your comments Maxx.

Really nice work. Just a thought: How about adding more characters to the front? Only Jackson looks a little empty down there. Perhaps Christensen and the girl right and left of him, more blended in with the BG. But I'm not wuite sure what kind of artwork is flowing around. Might not be possible.
One question: If you finish this, you think you could up your TT? Nobody seems to have the right font for this. Dont know if you cut or typed it, but it looks definitely perfect.

Thanks for your comments thorn... I'll up;oad the TT later on...

Thanks, that would be great!

Hi thorn, I just uploaded the TT you asked for...

Okay! I made a few changes and also made a new title, which I think looks much better... Comments and suggestions appreciated...

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5464/jumpervers2unfinisheduphj3.jpg

Sorry to say this to frankly, but the perspective used one the text is IMO absolutely horrible. A little bit would be ok, but like this it gets hard to read.
Concerning the title: I really like the effect, but the font could perhaps be more futuristic and edgy for this kinda-sci-fi movie.
After a quick check of my font-library I'd suggest something like 'Bank Gothic' or 'Eurostyle'.

Thanks for your comments thorn. But as you can see from the attached image, the text is very easy too read...

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/6229/textofjumperql2.jpg

yeah, i can read it good... great cover... cant for for finished version

yeah, i can read it good... great cover... cant for for finished version

Thanks RP... Glad you like it...

Hmm... I stand corrected. Was the size of the preview I guess.

yeah, i can read it good... great cover... cant for for finished version


LOL.. I meant to say Can't WAIT for the finished version.. fogot the wait...

Hmm... I stand corrected. Was the size of the preview I guess.

No problem thorn...

LOL.. I meant to say Can't WAIT for the finished version.. fogot the wait...

:lol: No problem RP, I knew what you meant...:lol::lol:

Nice work on the update boney.

Nice work on the update boney.

Thanks SW...

While I like where you're going with this, boney, I also see some issues, that you can think about.
While the synopsis is easy to read, the perspective of it throws the back off imo. The stills box under it and the pic behind does not share the same angle, and that makes the lay out akward imo. I agree that you should use another font for TT - and make the motion trail longer, less curved and more faded.

While I like where you're going with this, boney, I also see some issues, that you can think about.
While the synopsis is easy to read, the perspective of it throws the back off imo. The stills box under it and the pic behind does not share the same angle, and that makes the lay out akward imo. I agree that you should use another font for TT - and make the motion trail longer, less curved and more faded.
Points noted... What font do you suggest?

I made some changes. How's this look. I still need to know what font you suggest and should I leave the font colour White or change it to another colour?

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/3109/jumpervers2unfinisheduptq9.jpg

nice...update looks better...

nice...update looks better...

Thanks RP...