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Antistatic
11-27-2007, 12:25 AM
Hey guys, this is the start of my cover "Twisted"
Comments appreciated.

boneapart
11-27-2007, 12:41 AM
Looking good, but the pic behind the special Features needs the levels adjusting to make it the same as the other pics on the back.

Antistatic
11-27-2007, 08:19 PM
Looking good, but the pic behind the special Features needs the levels adjusting to make it the same as the other pics on the back.

Thanks, boneapart

update

JollyRoger
11-27-2007, 09:23 PM
Very nice indeed, Anti! - On the first preview I was going to mention that pic - but Boneapart beat me to it. This time around it's much better!

Now, a little something for your consideration:
It's a little bare in the right side under "suspense..." - what are your plans there?

If none: try to flip the pic of the damsel on the bed horisontally - and move "A snappy..." to the left hand side.

The reason I'm mentioning it, is that your upper backside is tilting a little to the left as it is now. By moving the pics I think you'll even the balance...

Other than that I have no comment but: Great work as usual, Anti!

SilentWarrior
11-27-2007, 11:17 PM
I agree with JR about that part looking a bit empty. You have done a great job here and the update looks much better.

boneapart
11-28-2007, 12:07 AM
The update is looking much better Anti...