Highdefjoe
11-24-2007, 11:36 AM
with upc
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2412/2058711117_6f2b8cd00e_b.jpg
without
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2324/2058721177_47c8384bc8_b.jpg
TheUnStoppable
11-24-2007, 07:13 PM
This is great :)
nice work.
don't cover up the tower with purple noise if you use UPC.
gravital
11-24-2007, 09:43 PM
Looks good so far. I think that some elements need to be moved around as the front looks crowded in areas and empty in others.
You may want to experiment with the tag line. Splitting it up in 2 one on the left and then the other on the right or decreasing the size.
SilentWarrior
11-25-2007, 12:32 AM
Some good suggestions have been given here. I also recommend keeping all the logos and legals to one color.
JollyRoger
11-27-2007, 09:30 PM
Apart from some very fine suggestions from my esteemed colleagues here, I'd like to draw your attention to the credits block. It sticks out to me... have you tried building one with either the Steel Tong or Top Billing font (found in the "Tools of the trade" section on this site)? I think that would improve the look.
Other than that, I'll just add: lookin' forward to see where you're going with this.
DarthVong
11-27-2007, 10:00 PM
Everyone has had great suggestions. If anything get rid of that noise on the spine. You have a great clean image for the background. No need to add that.
Highdefjoe
12-12-2007, 05:40 AM
Thanks for the tips guys. Sorry about the late reply, I was messing with a few other covers. Ill start working on this one again. That tagline may get deleted completely, along with the noisy spine. I figured that one solid image would look dull so I "dolled" it up. The font on the credits seems cartoonish to me. I thought it would go well with this movie. I do have top billing though.....
Thanks again guys, you always know exactly what is needed!!
shaunofthedead9
12-12-2007, 05:58 AM
The best part is that you are open to all suggestions, and you are willing to try all angles before coming to your final design. Thumbs up to you.
hurkale
12-12-2007, 03:51 PM
If can say a few words too, I guess you should make a border for those images on the reverse, maybe make the text a bit smaller (the logos are very big too) and i would just leave the UPC.
Anyway your cover is amazing. I really like the background. :thumbup:
sleepyhead
12-18-2007, 03:54 AM
Nice cover so far m8, just a few thoughts if I may...
Maybe the tag would look better on the slate he's sat on, might balance the front a little better, try it and see if it works.
Don't think the synopsis needs a stroke - makes it look fat/bulky to me.
Keep tinkering and I'm sure this'll turn out to be a great cover :thumbup:
Highdefjoe
12-18-2007, 07:23 AM
Thanks again for the tips! I'll update this as soon as I get a new computer. My original one tanked today.....