View Full Version : Elizabeth The Golden Age (Finished Version)


boneapart
11-17-2007, 01:14 AM
Just been messing with this... The Synopsis and Spec box are only fill-ins... Comments appreciated.

Image removed... See Update below...

SilentWarrior
11-17-2007, 10:12 AM
Looking good so far boney. Like what you have done on the front.

boneapart
11-17-2007, 11:22 AM
Looking good so far boney. Like what you have done on the front.

Thanks SW...

JollyRoger
11-17-2007, 01:07 PM
Cool one, BA! I too like the front - but on the middle pic You should raise the black level just a notch... (looks a little pale)

boneapart
11-17-2007, 01:34 PM
Cool one, BA! I too like the front - but on the middle pic You should raise the black level just a notch... (looks a little pale)

Thanks for the imput JR...

boneapart
11-17-2007, 02:21 PM
Okay! I altered the levels... How does it look now?

Images Removed... See Finished Version Below.

JollyRoger
11-17-2007, 03:59 PM
Much better this time around, BA! :thumbup:

shaunofthedead9
11-18-2007, 02:13 AM
Very different design. I like it! Can't wait to see the finished product.

gravital
11-18-2007, 04:37 AM
Cover looks good boneapart.

Some thoughts:

TT - I am not sure if this is the original used on the cover or other artwork but I think that if "Elizabeth" was in a fancy script font it would add a lot of meaning to the TT.By the size variation thereis an obvious want for attention to her name so if thsi is the original you would not be taking away from the general idea that went behind the creators intent.

Bot front pic - I think that if that was to lose the hand and curtain on the right it would look better. I am not sure waht size you have to work with but the pic choice is very centralized and it being off center is making it feel awkward. I realize that E is the center focus but you also have to take into consideration the gentelman on her right and the high contrast in colors to either side. By shifting the pics to the right som and having the center near the space between the two figures it will balance out much better.

Gray - I do not mind the color but think that you could add a foil texture along with some highlights and shadow. This will complete an elegant look that would strike me as more fitting for the film.

Hope these ideas help and not hinder your progress.

boneapart
11-19-2007, 03:40 PM
Okay Guys! I think this is now finished... Comments appreciated...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9026/elizabeththegoldenage3dth1.jpg
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5351/elizabeththegoldenagefltf6.jpg

easylife
11-19-2007, 04:44 PM
Is that piece of wall from the bottom picture supposed to me in the middle box with the title? just looks a little odd.

boneapart
11-19-2007, 04:50 PM
Is that piece of wall from the bottom picture supposed to me in the middle box with the title? just looks a little odd.

:omg:Thanks for pointing that out easylife, I've just fixed that now. I didn't realise I hadn't removed that bit.:)

gravital
11-19-2007, 05:09 PM
I like the updated version. I still think Elizabeth should be in a script like font. :)

boneapart
11-19-2007, 05:20 PM
I like the updated version. I still think Elizabeth should be in a script like font. :)

Thanks Gravital... Suggest one for me... By the way, hope you noticed I changed the bottom pic...

gravital
11-19-2007, 08:17 PM
Yes I did notice. This one is great looking as well. It does look more balanced than the other though.

For the font...

Not sure what you have so here are a few that should do the trick.

Balmoral
CC Lasko Condensed
CAC Shishoni Brush
Campaign Normal
Edwardian Script
English
Kunstler Script
Palace Script
Parchment (Not a script but the E is awesome_
Shelley Volante Script
Slogan
Uechi Regular
Vladimir

boneapart
11-19-2007, 11:55 PM
Thanks Gravital. I'll check those out. I'll probably be able to get hold of most of those if not all of them...

SilentWarrior
11-19-2007, 11:58 PM
I like your update boney:thumbup:. I agree that a script like font may add to the theme.

boneapart
11-20-2007, 12:15 AM
I like your update boney:thumbup:. I agree that a script like font may add to the theme.

Thanks SW... I'll change the font...

boneapart
11-20-2007, 01:11 AM
Okay! I had all those fonts bar one, so I decided on Edwardian Script... Hope this finishes it now...
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4459/elizabeththegoldenage3dvc6.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/4850/elizabeththegoldenagefllp3.jpg