dragonwarrior
11-03-2007, 09:27 AM
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View Full Version : LIONS for LAMBS dragonwarrior 11-03-2007, 09:27 AM started this SilentWarrior 11-03-2007, 12:25 PM Looking good DW. I feel that there is something missing at the bottom of the front. I also think the spine TT may be a tad too large. In my opinion the synopsis on the back is too long and needs to be pruned. If you make it shorter you wont need to squash the font as is current. JollyRoger 11-03-2007, 12:53 PM Good start... I agree with SW though. The texture, which You have chosen - looks blurred. In Your spec. box some of the logos are not aligned properly (Dolby, CC and Reg. All). Also You might consider to use another color for the box - as it sorta disappears in the redish tint of Your pic there... Keep it up, DW!:thumbup: gravital 11-03-2007, 06:23 PM I really did not mind the texture. However I think that it is contrasting with the other elements on the front too much. It may look better if they opened up a bit. Try spreading the love. Names may look better higher and the TT lower. It's worth a try. I do agree that synopsis is rather long and needs to be trimmed. Now, if there is nothing that you can remove from the synopsis I would suggest moving the main pic up (there is a lot of unimportant space at the top) and enlarging the space between the lines of text. dragonwarrior 11-03-2007, 07:43 PM agree with most of what was said, i thought most of it, just wanted a second oppinion) except JR the blur , as the truth can be blurred (my spin on it) again g you mention and pin point the TT, never thought of that but seems a good idea. thought the back main pic should go up and the synops was long so i'll give it an edit it(or try), just wanted to see what was what. gravital 11-03-2007, 10:56 PM Who can blame ya for puttin your feelers out there. It's good to see the reaction to a project if you are unsure if it is working or not. dragonwarrior 11-04-2007, 02:21 AM forgot to mention, but the UA is one i made, not great just for effect, wondering if anybody had a gudun or give me a link to one i could use, cheers in advance shaunofthedead9 11-04-2007, 02:46 AM Looks good DW, I like the second version. JollyRoger 11-04-2007, 12:46 PM The second version is best. I still think You should change the color on the spec box. boneapart 11-04-2007, 01:04 PM Second version is better... gravital 11-04-2007, 08:58 PM I like two... too. :) dragonwarrior 11-04-2007, 10:06 PM I still think You should change the color on the spec box.:omg::jedi: Soz m8 but i like it,thanx for the input though, changed the CC DD Region All as i never noticed them being off kilt OlufSand 11-14-2007, 09:42 PM Second version looks nice, i agree about that specs box, the red color is standing to much out of the picture in my opinion, but nice .) /O.Sand |