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JollyRoger
10-28-2007, 12:49 AM
R0..

SW was so happy about this - so what can I do? - Gotta translate it for You guys and girlies...:thumbup:

Comments, please?

gravital
10-28-2007, 06:25 AM
JR you are the bomb! This is a great lookin set and I can see why SW was so happy with it.

The only comments I have are...

Cover-
1. I think the synopsis should follow the imaginary line created by the screen cap flow.

2. There is a slight variation in color mid spine that makes the cloud pattern look unnatural ( by the E in The)

Label-

1. I really struggled finding anything wrong. I would leave it as is. However if you want to get nit-picky try and add in some atmosphereic perspective to the locusts.

boneapart
10-28-2007, 11:37 AM
Excellent combo JR...:thumbup:

JollyRoger
10-28-2007, 11:49 AM
Fixed the mentioned things... Ready for the gallery yet??

I'll leave the label as it is...

JollyRoger
10-28-2007, 11:50 AM
Excellent combo JR...:thumbup:

Thx BA! Much appreciated.

JollyRoger
10-28-2007, 03:09 PM
Uploadet to the gallery