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JollyRoger
10-03-2007, 12:57 AM
I think perhaps the back is a bit crowded - perhaps if I lose Megatron?

SilentWarrior
10-03-2007, 01:40 AM
I like what you've done here JR. The front looks great with the robotic hands and I like how the rocky texture extends to the back. The back seems a bit overcrowded when you look at it as a whole. Maybe try removing one of them as you say.

boneapart
10-03-2007, 09:39 AM
Nice work JR. But like you say, the back is a bit over crowded. Can't wait to see the edited version.

shaunofthedead9
10-03-2007, 03:24 PM
Cheers on the front cover JR. I always like when designers go in a different direction on their covers. Very original idea, can't wait to see the final product.

gravital
10-03-2007, 07:27 PM
Great lookin cover JollyRoger. The back is a tad crowded. However it does not bother me that much. So whether M goes or stays it will still look good.
Something that I did not see mention of was the black levels on the hand. That compared with the images below you can see that the hand needs to be adjusted to bring out the black more. This will also pull it off of the background to provide a more startling appearance.

JollyRoger
10-03-2007, 09:29 PM
Thanks for all the feedback SW; BA; SOTD9 & G!:goodpost:

So... I removed the BIG M - and adjusted the black levels of the hand - and somehow the Tagline got crushed in the process...

I also made the label to go with this cover.

Let me know what You think...

SilentWarrior
10-04-2007, 01:57 AM
The back does look better like that. Nice work on the label as well. :)

JollyRoger
10-04-2007, 11:55 AM
Thx SW!

Made another label as well. I think it's done now...

ulookingatme
10-04-2007, 06:09 PM
Looks excellent mate, love the labels :thumbup:

gravital
10-04-2007, 06:35 PM
Great work on these JollyRoger. Looks much better. The labels also work well.
I noticed the pic change on the back of the cover in the last 3D attachment. Nice change.

nonini
10-04-2007, 09:42 PM
Very good work Jolly :thumbup:
Great work.

Cheers nonini :)

JollyRoger
10-04-2007, 09:50 PM
Thank You ULAM, gravital & Nonini! Much Appreciated!

Deds
10-05-2007, 07:30 PM
excellent stuff mate... very nice work:cool:

JollyRoger
10-06-2007, 03:10 AM
Ohoy there, m8!

Thanks for the comment! Much Appreciated!
... but I have to ask ... was it You who pissed in me rum? :lol:

tightline_69
10-06-2007, 05:59 AM
Excellent work JR. The front is very cool

JollyRoger
10-06-2007, 12:50 PM
Thank you, tightline69! You're most kind, sir! :goodpost:

Deds
10-06-2007, 01:09 PM
Ohoy there, m8!

Thanks for the comment! Much Appreciated!
... but I have to ask ... was it You who pissed in me rum? :lol:

hehe... not guilty matey, cant waste good rum..... but yer coffee pot... well um.. maybee :lol: