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JollyRoger
10-01-2007, 01:21 PM
My translation in progress....

SilentWarrior
10-01-2007, 01:33 PM
Nice work JR. Even though the front of his skull is dark I guess you could say it gives off that charred look. I really like the label design as well. The positioning of the two faces is spot.

JollyRoger
10-01-2007, 01:41 PM
Thx, m8! - Much appreciated. I can see what gravital was talking about - but I think that it's ok for the front of the skull to be a little dark - after all - the flames are his "hair" - so the light would be coming from behind, thus the "face" should be in shadows...

gravital
10-01-2007, 09:07 PM
Excellent job on the label JR. But as this is a WIP section I will offer some recos. How about extending the skull teetht all the way right. Give it a light opacity so that it is barely noticeable until you start to really look at the image. I would also reco the same concept for the left eye. Have a transparecy in the black socket. Not sayin this needs any work further... I am just curious to see if that would make it look even better. Ya never know until you try.

The cover I have already commeted on previously. It is still an amazing cover. Great job on both of these JR.

JollyRoger
10-01-2007, 09:24 PM
Something like this?

I kinda like the idea - but I think perhaps the old version was better...

gravital
10-01-2007, 09:45 PM
Yeah, but the mouth portion looks so neat.

JollyRoger
10-02-2007, 08:50 AM
...Thx for the input, guys. I left it as is - and it's now available in the artwork Gallery...

Deds
10-02-2007, 07:23 PM
nice work matey :thumbup:

ulookingatme
10-02-2007, 07:29 PM
Really like this cover and label , top work mate :thumbup: