My version...what you think?

Looks good. I think it needs something more at the back just can't put my finger on it at the moment. Maybe something in between the synopsis and stat box?:dunno:

The art is superb...............i have not seen it before...........would like to see some more of this.

I am not sure on the way the synopsis is laid out though!:thumbup:

I finished...

Jeez.....................i just spotted what you could not put your finger on SW...........it has been staring us in the face............

The image of the girl at the top of the back cover...............she is floating in air:omg: